Antigone Cadmus

Here (again) as requested! Hmmm... it doesn't look like you've changed it very much. ^_^ There aren't any grammar problems but you still really suffer from a lack of description. ...

Go for it. It only took me an hour or two to read. It is basically an entirely different book. I didn't like it very much, but it was entertaining. ...

Hey, Olivia Campbell. Nice to meet you. I haven't seen you around before... perhaps you should go and introduce yourself on the welocme forum? Unlike beckiw, my specialty is grammar. ...

*Sakura loves both and cannot decide* How can you choose?

Oh, wow. Thanks for all the feedback, everyone! It's all been very helpful. I'm not completely sure about continuing this. I will need extreme convincing. I've been working on a ...

Oh! I have the perfect book for you (if you haven't already read it): Interview with the Vampire by Anne Rice. It was amazing. Her writing is gorgeous.

Yeah, I realize it is only the first part. I would just take out the parts with words such as "popped", "mope", "joint"- anything you can picture being said by ...

Okay, here's the second part of the review you wanted! An expression that i couldn't make out flickered across the thing's face. i should be capitalized. Also, don't tell me ...

The proper response would be, "Thanks, you obviously put a lot of time into this review even though it didn't meet your criteria of not being longer than three and ...

Aww. Sorry, Vera! Really, I didn't mean to be so harsh. I get...carried away sometimes. But: I only rip apart work I know will be amazing with a few edits. ...

Edgar Allen Poe haters???? He's a genius! Niccy! You hated The Messenger? That book was gorgeous! I hated My Brother Sam is Dead. The end is given away by the ...

Not as cliche as yours, Amniel-kun. Show me the cliche.

It's time to talk about cliches lol. Amniel-not a good idea to get on my bad side when I'm the only one who critiques your work. Snarky male character. Meets ...

Fasnay...hmm... *considers* perhaps, perhaps. I usually try to give my names meaning... Later in the story actual Werish comes in. My Werish is based off of German. Sooo, if anyone ...

No. Dear God. Do not read the 1000 page version of The Stand as I did.